Hello!
Chapter 6 of the Guardian Spirit story is done and the link for the whole story is below. Besides a whole new chapter there are a lot of changes to the other chapters as well. A small list of the changes:
- Chapter 1 should now be pretty much stable. Some small grammar mistakes/typos aside.
- Chapter 2 received a major rework. It should read much better now. Content wise I’d consider the chapter done.
- Chapter 3 received small tweaks, mainly to give more emotion to the story and characters
- Chapter 4 received minor tweaks. Mainly to improve the feel.
- Chapter 5 received minor tweaks. Mainly to improve the feel.
- Chapter 6 released. I’m the only one who has read it so expect there to be things I have been blind to after many readings.
Hope you enjoy it 🙂